tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30859879.post7825445959245621452..comments2023-10-29T20:57:52.937+05:30Comments on SleepingTablets: Persistence of ChangeMarvinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08469943928047272771noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30859879.post-18831496120425560292009-07-31T11:49:49.792+05:302009-07-31T11:49:49.792+05:30you find the writing style average perhaps because...you find the writing style average perhaps because it's very different from what i have written recently. the post hardly pays any attention to details. well, it does so but only in moderation. there are no lengthy descriptions of smoke rings waltzing their way around a room. and i used conversations for the first time since ages. <br /><br />style. different? definitely. average? well, so be it.<br /><br />about starting a thought process on several fronts? that is always my intention. it just doesn't work most of the time though.Marvibnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30859879.post-89840637548908726452009-07-31T09:14:52.303+05:302009-07-31T09:14:52.303+05:30Honest. Yes. Writing style? Average I'd say. Y...Honest. Yes. Writing style? Average I'd say. You have written better. But you know that. It got me thinking on several fronts, some of which I'll try to tackle through other means of electronic conversation (gaah). <br /><br />You're definitely right about the people changing bit. They do so without knowing it. Places show symptoms of change. People change quietly. Which becomes all the more difficult to gauge.Chandnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17626244481116604736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30859879.post-35547830843943934752009-07-30T23:58:27.954+05:302009-07-30T23:58:27.954+05:30Honest? Ha ha, if you say so. But yes, I felt cont...Honest? Ha ha, if you say so. But yes, I felt content after writing this one. Usually there are highs and lows. This one was a constant throughout.<br /><br />The problems? Yes, yes. I see your point. I have made the changes too.<br /><br />:PMarvinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08469943928047272771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30859879.post-67999692042752011372009-07-30T22:58:06.158+05:302009-07-30T22:58:06.158+05:30Correction: "Ritwick had hardly spoken a word...Correction: "Ritwick had hardly spoken a word to his son." What I mean is that they can't be talked about at the same level, can they? Their relationship is what's significant.Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083454333494549203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30859879.post-4704906544995090972009-07-30T22:54:47.036+05:302009-07-30T22:54:47.036+05:30A very honest post. That's the best part. Unli...A very honest post. That's the best part. Unlike some of your earlier posts, this one seemed just right without much conversation.<br /><br />Now, some problems:<br /><br />1) Aren't Akanksha and Shlok very recent urban names? I don't think many of our parents' generation would have been named thus. What say?<br /><br />2) Even if that is the case, "Ritwick had hardly spoken a word to Shlok " sounds weird. Shouldn't it be "Ritwick had hardly spoken a word to his father?"Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083454333494549203noreply@blogger.com